Bryan Curtis- Masters Poetic Writing

New Lynn flood


Just imagine one million bullets smashing the ground like an assassin trying to shoot someone with a machine gun. Those one million bullets was rain, it struck the grounds of New Lynn. The rain was so bad it caused an enormous flood. The flood was 2 meters high in some places.

The wind was also gliding through so quick, it moved a garage. The grass was so muddy, it would splash into your face if you jumped into it. Then suddenly, crump! A massive sinkhole appeared.


Bryan, I really enjoyed reading your published work. You have used a strong language features to set the scene and hook the reader into your tale. Great work, Tino pai.

- Mr Yost

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